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This Light Novel left me truly speechless. By speechless, I mean it in a good way.. This light novel is more suitable for patient and people with more mature views. The MC might not be your typical OP MC in animes but it doesn’t affect my views on this Novel. With just deep words that hit so hard, it’s easy for you to tear up near the end. That’s the power of this light novel. The story might be slow, but everything is made for a purpose. If you have doubts on picking up this novel, just heed everyone else’s and my reviews. This Masterpiece is definitely worth your time

In the huge bountiful production of Shonen series out there many continue to go on forever and are filled with cliche's and troupes galore. Fullmetal Alchemist is a series that shines above the rest. There is no pointless power-up, fight the bad guy and continually lose and come back only to repeat the cycle over and over again.

It is very story driven. And character driven. Every character takes a part in the grand scheme of things. Every conversation has value and shows importance to the advancement of plot and development. It is a powerful tale of sacrifice, love, friendship, family, and reaching your potential.

I cannot recommend this series enough. Whether you are new to manga/anime or an acquaintance that has not yet delved into the world of FMA, it is a must .

Yume Onna is written by Hideo Yamamoto, who is most well known for his Ichi the Killer manga. The art is by Hiroya Oku, creator of the Gantz series.

The story revolves around our main character Lime, who after reading an article about lucid dreaming decides that she to try it. The story focuses on dreams as the main topic ,and because of this we are treated to surrealistic imagery and situations (think giant naked people and whales floating through the air).

The characters are very one dimensional, with not enough time to really develop them. If this had more chapters focusing on the character's, to try and develop them and give them more substance the score could be much better.

The art by Oku is fine, by no means is it his greatest work, It is however... not awful, I personally think it looks quite nice. Specifically some shots from the dream state Lime is in.

Overall I think the current score of 6.47 is fair. By no means is this an awful manga, it's decent. It is however, not memorable. It is very short and you will complete it in under 20 minutes. This premise for a manga is very promising, but in Yume Onna it is not reaching its full potential.

I did a short talk about the manga if you want to hear more about it that I may have left out in this review :
https://youtu.be/regw68DdmDM

Lolicon theme, read it you'll want to!

Story: The story is a linear system, with the constant problems popping up here and there. Drama is the major theme for the story. The plot is good with added character. Also by giving a clear view of whats happening in the character's pasts and future choices. The story is delivering a satisfying time line.

Art: Manga art is never perfect, but the author tries their best to visualize what is happening in each panel. The art is the style of long limbs, which has not giving a perfect title, but I think that's okay.

Character: The drama is perfect and the words can easily be matched with each character's speech, in a visual format. The story's speech bubbles do not point to the character and the placement of text can sometimes be confusing, though readable still.

Enjoyment: As a Lolicon I enjoyed it, but the abuse of the girl is kinda creepy, I won't not recommend this to a softy-hentai otaku.

Overall: I liked it, even if I'm not finished, I believe it would be good for a drama, hentai viewer.

Story: ?/10
There really is no story but that wasn't the point in the first place, this is basically a manga-drawing course in 8 chapters. That being said, I liked how the were little situations used to demonstrate the concepts

Art: 6/10
Not much, not bad, your typical shoujo art style well-done

Overall (?/10)
If you are interested in the topic of manga-drawing, specially shoujo, give it a try, there is a chance you will like it, but I really don't feel like I can give this a proper ratting without the necessary understatement of the art.

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Story: ?/10
There really is no story but that wasn't the point in the first place, this is basically a manga-drawing course in 8 chapters. That being said, I liked how the were little situations used to demonstrate the concepts

Art: 6/10
Not much, not bad, your typical shoujo art style well-done

Overall (?/10)
If you are interested in the topic of manga-drawing, specially shoujo, give it a try, there is a chance you will like it, but I really don't feel like I can give this a proper ratting without the necessary understatement of the art.

A cute short story about a girl riding a scooter and an old man riding a bee.
Made by Ashinano Hitoshi, the author of what is (probably) the best slice-of-life manga to ever exist, Yokohama Kaidashi Kikou.

Only 20 pages long, the characters, the story and the art get the job done, nothing special mind you, it's just a nice, adorable one-shot that you would probably skip over. I recommend it, not reading it would be a shame considering it's just one chapter, and it might brighten your day or your hour a little if you're feeling down.

(I'm adding this paragraph as filler due to MAL requiring a longer character amount to submit the review)

this is my first ever review, so i'm going to keep this short. personally, i greatly enjoy this manga and i look forward to seeing it develop more in the future. (keep in note i am only at chapter 14 at the time i am doing this review)

story-9
the story hasnt had much development yet, but the author manages to hint at some background events while keeping the story fun and easy to read.

art-9
i think the art style fits quite well with the story, but isnt award winning.

character-8
the characters are funny and and have something about them that makes it impossible to hate them, but the story hasnt progressed so far as to give them enough development.

enjoyment-9
i enjoy reading this story everytime a new chapter comes out and it helps me keep my mind off other things.

overall-9
yeah 9/10 is pretty much a fitting note to this manga for me

Hahaha damn! I was laughed so hard when read the last chapter, REALLY I MEAN IT! What was that?! Imagine a story that was developed so good, then all of the possibilities on how the story would goes closed, and the resolves compressed IN A CHAPTER! I don't know what to say. Is this what people call 'twist ending' or 'forced ending'? I think this manga did the latter.

I kinda disappointed at how the story ended. I had read some short mangas that also have roughly 2-3 volumes, and they did good at developed the story till it ended. But this manga is different.

Ok, let's do a proper review.

The story: 7/10
Okay, the story of this manga is somehow mentioning future, when some people (who appeared to be some loli) came from the future to save a person whose the 'seeds' may become a savior of the world later. Do you know what are the 'seeds'? Sperms. Yes, sperms. Actually their duty is to keep a high school boy's sperms from villains who was ordered to kill the boy who somehow will become a world's hero's father. What an interesting premise, right? (Did you get what i said? If you didn't, i'm sorry for my bad english :D and then jump to the last paragraph to see my overall part.)

From this point, i suggested you to assume that this manga has a lot chapters, because that's what i did when i wrote this review. Why did i do that, because when i read this manga i somehow put some hope on the story. It was a good sci-fi comedy story with many funny moments and sometime (or rarely) the MC throwed a short parody tsukkomi that made the scene more hilarious. Unfortunately, signs of a 'forced ending' (or so i say) began to show up at the last pages of the 13th chapter (the one before the last.)

Yeah, it's not like i totally hated the way this story went. I appreciated every manga and anime i enjoyed. Actually, if the 'forced ending' i said was true, this manga did a good job (yes, good, at least.) The resolve put in the last chapter was a plausible one, even though there were some long-long-long explanations that the characters should had to said (and yet they were roughly made sense.)

That's the flaw part, in my opinion. Actually there's a part in this story that I REALLY LOVE IT SO MUCH LOL!! Unfortunately, if i tell it here it would become a huge spoiler to you all the readers, so read the manga if you curious :D

The art: 8/10
I actually do not really understand about art and how someone made a manga, but i think this manga has a good art and tidy panels, the character art is also consistent. In my opinion, who is just a mere manga reader, this manga doesn't has any flaw in it's art.

The character: 8/10
Great characters, and hilarious to see that every character has its own way to make a funny scene, like the MC, an almost-shut-in high school student who found himself being protected by a badass loli robot (?) came from the future, or another loli who is the one in charge on that duty. There was a good potential in developing the characters, or maybe (in my opinion) every one of them can have their own arc, if the story was not ended so early.

The enjoyment: 8/10
Like another short story, this manga is like a wind, that is so good to be felt, but it's just for a moment. But after all, i enjoyed every chapter of this manga that consistently funny in its own way.

Overall: technically it's 8/10 if you count the average rate. But personally i gave it 7 out of 10, maybe because of that 'disappointed feeling' i had after read the last chapter. I still felt it, i hope the author is so generous he would make a sequel :( I mean it, since it's rare for me to like a sci-fi manga.

Finally, for you who is looking for some lolis; who is like sci-fi manga; who is looking for a 'twist ending' ; who needs some SHORT manga to fulfill your boredom; i recommend this funny manga.

There's something of substance in the premise here but that substance is greatly underutilized. There is a tremendous lack of explanation which makes everything feels random. The plot jumps around randomly pulling out plot points without properly developing them and hence having everything feeling rushed without actually giving a feeling of any structure or solid development. A good example of this is the ending, where they seem to pull an attempt at making the villains sympathetic, despite discussing how they massacred a heroine's family only a chapter or so before, and hence this fails to work at all. The characters too seem to have interesting personalities and traits in general, but the manga doesn't really seem to develop that all that well at all and the unique traits of all the characters don't really shine through. The motivations for most characters, especially Zonmi, feel tremendously underdeveloped. And in the end, beyond possibly Manami, most of them feel quite forgettable. The art is pretty good. 

tl;dr: A relatively interesting premise and characters but one that tries to push forward without properly developing anything at all. 

I gave this manga a 3 but not because it's bad or anything but because it's the most fucked up shit I've ever read in my entire life. The author of this manga must have the most twisted mind possible to be able to come up with shit like this. In general the dead tube is a good horror manga it just lacks the realism of works such as the ones of junji ito. The characters in the manga were all probably just as twisted as the author himself and it was really nice seeing all these mentally ill characters interact with each other because it's partly really uniquely made in this manga. Another thing I want to compliment is the quality of the art. The only reason I rated it this low is because it was so shocking at some points that i ended up feeling like shit for the next few weeks afterwards and i really hate that feeling. Conclusively I can fairly say that deadtube is objectivly probably around a 7 but for me not hire than a 3 because it's way too fucked up for my own taste.
If you are into really fucked up horror manga with mentally ill characters then dead tube is for you. If you are a normal person, please stay away from it for the love of god I'm begging you I don't want you to experience the same shit that I had to experience just go take a walk outside or learn a new skill or do fucking anything but read this manga you'll regret it afterwards trust me because once you start you will want to continue and your suffering will just get bigger the more you read so please just stay away from it as far as you can.