A really interesting story with nicely done character to go along with it. Even thought it has an unrealistic thing such as the power to stop time. The rest of the story is pretty grounded in reality with how characters react and talk too each other.

While i do enjoy the story i'd say i have two problems with it that come towards near the end of it
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: Near the end the time power thing stops while the two MC's are messing around in front of the classroom. While i don't like this to begin with. It's made worse when one of the MC's just goes out and tells the entire class she has been stopping time and invading peoples privacy. Not only would no one believe that but they would also be made fun of cause of this confession. I feel it could have been done better with the two MC's finding out the power is gone so they aren't humiliated in front of the entire class and also have the MC not reveal that she had power to stop time.

: My other issue could be called a gripe i guess. But while i do understand that it isn't needed anymore. I do kind of wish the MC kept the power to stop time. The relationship between them was only able to start cause of that power and the two of them would have fun pulling antics. I just feel that i could've been better if the MC still kept their power.


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Over all good story to read with a couple of spots that makes you cringe from how awkward they are.