Lip Smoke review

Sallachi13
Apr 05, 2021
Since this doesn't have any reviews yet, I'll give it a shot.
The story was very simple, a young high school girl works errands for a publisher company, and happens to become an assistant for an erotic fiction novelist who himself is 32. This at first seems to be an odd pairing, but works out since he displays cute characteristics.
He is in search of a pure kiss, something he's forgotten and wants to remember, and whilst the girl, Setsuna Iwato, assumes he is a perverted man along with the rest of men, she discovers that it may not be so.
9/10
The Art was beautiful, descriptive, and often cute. I honestly have no complaints.
10/10
Each character has their own distinct personality, and whilst this is a one shot some character development is shown in both characters.
9/10
I truly thoroughly enjoyed this one shot, it showed a different side of shoujo which was both different and strangely intriguing. By the end I was smiling like an idiot, but what can i say? My only regret is that this doesn't continue, for such a distinct storyline and the way things ended, there was space for much more to happen.
10/10
Overall this is a nice short story for those interested in the genre, and for those who don't mind the age gap. I would highly reccommend this, as its not often I give a one-shot such a high rating.
9/10
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Lip Smoke
Lip Smoke
Author Nishikata, Mai
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